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Closing Remarks The LIT Bloggers would like to take this opportunity to thank our Course Lecturer and fellow colleagues for viewing a...
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This week we continued our mini lesson sessions. This session intended to give us an opportunity to experience and practice of the te...
I really enjoyed listening to your podcast. The images used were very captivating and was very much appropriate and set the tone for the descriptive piece. Awesome job!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Dieanie for those encouraging words.
DeleteI enjoyed listening to your piece . Very interesting I must say. Good use of illustrations.
ReplyDeleteJob well done !
Nasha John
Thank you Nasha. Descriptive writing is meaningful to me.
DeleteWow Ryan...I was captivated from the first few seconds...the illustrations, your voice, the background music, perfect combination...great job!
ReplyDeleteThank you Leah. Descriptive writing is something I am passionate about and so your compliments are greatly acknowledged and appreciated.
Deleteoh Ryan... the images coupled with the serene background music of the ocean's waves really helped this piece come to life! You also did an excellent job in using appropriate descriptive words in writing this piece. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteThank you Leotha. It is very encouraging and motivating to hear such superb compliments from my peers.
DeleteGood job Ryan incorporating the images and videos to go with your piece. They really made your piece come alive. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteI am happy to hear that you feel this way about my podcast and piece.
DeleteVery Good Ryan! I really loved the images. They suited your piece and very appropriate for your grade level. I also loved the art used in the beginning which captured my attention. The additional visuals were lovely.
ReplyDeleteWell Done!
Thank you so much for the encouraging and motivating feedback!
DeleteThis descriptive piece of writing was well done. you utilize good illustrations, the background music and your voice complimented your piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you Beverley. I am happy you enjoyed my podcast.
DeleteI loved this! I felt like I was listening to a documentary on Nat. Geo. Lovely introduction. Great descriptive piece. Effective use of colourful language.
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate your comment Brittany. Thank you for the encouraging words.
DeleteYour voice fitted this piece, and you did well in putting it together. Wonderfully done Ryan! A well described and grade appropriate piece.
ReplyDeleteAbigail
Much appreciated Abigail! Thank you!
Deletewonderful introduction and very well executed and descriptive piece,the use of videos brought it to life. Great job Ryan
ReplyDeleteR.Narcisse
Great job, Ryan! I particularly like the moving images. A bit of expressive reading involving voice modulation can make this piece a lot more appealing to the ear.
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